Massage “About Us” Marketing Video

In: Marketing Videos Critique

29 Sep 2009

This 2 minute 49 second video looks like he did it himself, but it is very good (content wise). The sound is pretty unprofessional and the lighting and some of the editing could have been better, but again – the content is excellent. You meet Angel Rivera…and learn how and what he does. It is great that you get to see some of what he does (it looks like it feels great!). You also find out where you can see you – at a chiropractic office or he can come to your home with his massage table.

Can you see how you get a feel for his personality and who he is? With something so personal as massage, many will want to get to know him a bit and learn about him before setting up an appointment. This video is not doubt helping potential clients get to know, like, and trust him.

Another improvement I see would be to never list an AOL, Yahoo, Gmail, etc. email address for a business. He already owns the domain name…it would be a simple matter to have an email address with the same domain name. His business suddenly looks far smaller and less professional with the AOL email address. If he wants to us AOL, he could forward the email going to the domain email to his AOL account. These little details also influence how the video and business is viewed.

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